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Thursday, August 13, 2026

Hertling’s Found Haiku, ‘Polished Diamonds’

Review by Bill Doughty––


Retired U.S. Army Lt. Gen. Mark Hertling concludes his vital book “If I Don’t Return” with deep reflection and a hope that the advice he offer is received as intended: as a gift to help others.


Much of his advice is reflected in a prayer by General Douglas MacArthur, “Build Me a Son, O Lord.” 


Citing elements of the prayer, Hertling writes,

“Be strong enough to admit weakness. Be brave enough to face yourself. Hold you head up in honest defeat and lower it in victory. Be selfless, kind, and fair. Seek the truth and laugh often. Choose service over self. Draw out the myriad motivations that live in others. Polish diamonds –– gently, patiently, precisely –– until their brilliance helps others see. Our world needs all of that, from each of us.”

The following “found haiku” (unintended poetic prose revealed in 5-7-5 syllables) are polished diamonds quoted from Hertling’s book:


In his introduction:


In these pages, strength

In values. In character.

In purpose. In love


From a key section, “Make it Matter”:


Don’t delay. Don’t wait.

Don’t count the days. Instead, make

every day count


Regarding the value of the military family’s support back home (from a saying by Martha Summerhayes written in 1866):


I had cast my lot

with a soldier, and where he 

was, was home to me


On the importance of civilian communities’ expressions of appreciation and kindness to deployed service members:


We should all take that

lesson to heart. Make someone

feel better today


After appreciating the “permanence” of death and environmental destruction in the aftermath of combat:


The awareness that

long after war’s end, it is

the loss that endures


On the biggest “diamond” in his book –– finding and embracing humility:


Victory is a

terrible teacher if you

let it flatter you

Humility is a core value for Hertling, especially important for good leaders. “Take your job, but never yourself, seriously,” he advises.


In a very personal insight, Hertling discusses his Christian faith and how prayer helped him early in his life, especially when deployed to Desert Shield and in Desert Storm.


“Over time, my faith has become less about answers and more about the courage to ask better questions,” he writes. “To walk into uncertainty with conviction, not arrogance.”


Curiosity led him to explore other religious scriptures and beliefs.


“My faith now includes mystery –– and mystery requires humility.” [And THAT is a near found haiku.]


Hertling says, “It’s good to be humble enough to learn. To be bold enough to explore. And to be wise enough to know that culture isn’t about comparison. It’s about connections,” he writes. Hertling made lifelong connections wherever he was stationed, including in Germany (right).

Humility. Connections. Honor, Courage and Commitment…


It is impossible to read “If I Don’t Return” without thinking about current chaos in 2026: the War with Iran and suffering of Sailors aboard USS Abraham Lincoln (CVN-72).; the cruelty by ICE “shock troops” on American streets; ongoing efforts at election interference and other attacks on constitutional democracy; and corruption of the Justice Department, Department of Defense, and the greedy president and his family.


“Humility prevents power from becoming arrogance, wisdom from becoming pride, and strength from becoming cruelty,” Hertling writes. “Humility is not the absence of strength –– it is strength under control.”


Throughout this great book, Hertling not surprisingly quotes a lot of Lao Tzu and Clausewitz, philosophers who have long inspired military leaders. But he also works in some Mark Twain, Epictetus, and even Michael Jordan, Mike Tyson, and Yogi Berra.

And, a quote from an episode of the popular show Ted Lasso stands out.


Hertling writes,

“Lasso explains that people often judge too quickly because they think they know enough about someone or something. He mentions a quote he once saw on a wall: ‘Be curious, not judgmental.’ The rest of the episode doesn't matter, because that's the best advice for leaders. Curiosity keeps you learning. Curiosity keeps you humble. And curiosity keeps you open to the possibility that the next great lesson may come from the most unexpected source.”

This book is a must-read for any military leader, and in Hertling’s mind that means anyone in uniform. But it also written as a guide for anyone in business, medicine, sports, or other fields.


American hero and Hertling’s friend, retired Admiral William H. McRaven, agrees. His extended blurb reads:

“‘If I Don't Return’ is the story every soldier wants to tell but struggles to put into words. Deeply personal, incredibly moving, and storytelling at its finest! Mark Hertling has written a timeless tale of life as a soldier, a father, and a wartime leader, but this book is about more than combat— it is about how we face life's greatest challenges with faith, wisdom, and gratitude. Everyone who is searching will find something of value in this beautifully written narrative.”

McRaven is, of course, former commander of U.S. Special Operations Command, who under orders from Commander in Chief President Barack Obama found and killed Osama bin Laden.


Filled with polished diamonds of wisdom, “If I Don’t Return: A Father’s Wartime Journal” by Mark Hertling, Lieutenant General, U.S. Army (Retired) is published by Ballast Books, 2026.

Wednesday, July 29, 2026

Cannibalism at Sea: Right or Wrong?

Review by Bill Doughty––

Cannibalism is a grisly relic of the ancient past with a few notable modern exceptions. How could it possibly be relevant today?


Adam Cohen shows the relevance in his remarkable, insightful, and disgusting book, “The Captain’s Dinner: A Shipwreck, an Act of Cannibalism, and a Murder Trial that Changed Legal History” (Author’s Equity, 2025).


The book, dedicated “To all the cabin boys, both literal and otherwise,” opens with an introduction of the main characters and a bloody scene:

“On September 6, 1884, a German sailing ship pulled into the harbor in Falmouth, England, and deposited three emaciated men who had been to hell and back. Captain Thomas Dudley, first mate Edwin Stephens, and able seaman Edward Brooks had survived a shipwreck in the South Atlantic and drifted for weeks on the open sea in a flimsy wooden life-boat. They were eventually rescued, and now that they were safely home, they had a shocking story to tell.

In the lifeboat, the three men-and Richard Parker, their seventeen-year-old cabin boy-had no food or water. They were wasting away, their stomachs empty, their mouths parched, and their tongues turning black. In time, Dudley made a grim decision: They would kill the cabin boy so they could survive on his flesh and blood.

Dudley stabbed Parker to death while Stephens looked on, ready to help. Brooks, the conscientious objector of the group, opposed the killing and refused to participate. Once the deed was done, all three men eagerly drank the cabin boy's blood and feasted on his flesh. This grim food supply kept the three survivors alive for a few crucial days, until the German ship, which happened to be sailing by, stopped and took them on board.”

The three survivors thought they would be welcomed back in England with open arms.


After all, “the Custom of the Sea” allowed for shipwrecked sailors to draw lots and sacrifice one so the others could survive. But Captain Dudley (at right) with First Mate Stephens’s approval, murdered the young cabin boy without his consent and without drawing lots. They faced trial for murder.

Dudley was a devout Anglican who had taken the boy under his tutelage. With his prayer books, he had vowed to help Richard Parker become a good man on their ill-fated sail to from England to Australia. In his admission for the murder, Dudley told authorities, “I took out my knife first offering a prayer to God to forgive us for what we were about to do.”


Cohen presents a brief and relatable history of the Age of Sail. For example, something that will resonate with today’s Sailors: a “strong tradition of deference to captains.”

“Captains had what the law called ‘absolute discretion’ in many areas. Their dominion was inherent in the title ‘master’ commonly used for captains, which was short for the full legal title ‘master under God.’ It was widely accepted that captains were free to do what they wanted to their crews, almost without limit.”

The survivors had prayed for heavenly intervention in the three weeks since being shipwrecked. Brooks, the conscientious objector of the group, who nevertheless also drank Parker’s blood and feasted on his body, said they “all promised to live a better life” if God helped them be rescued.


Cohen also gives a stomach-turning history of cannibalism, as practiced in the ancient world and in extenuating survival circumstances –– and as sometimes justified, threatened, or practiced by religions and superstitions. He cites the Aztecs, Maori, and Fijians, and even the first English settlement in what would become the United States at Jamestown, Virginia, during the “Starving Time” of the winter of 1609-1610.


He quotes God’s supposed warning to the Israelites: “Then you shall eat the offspring of your own body, the flesh of your sons and of your daughters whom the Lord your God has given you.” Deuteronomy 28:53


Cohen notes, “Cannibalism also plays a central role in the Christian liturgy, which includes, in the Eucharist, the ritual consumption of the body and blood of Christ.”

After Uruguayan Air Force Flight 571 crashed in the Andes, survivors ate the corpses of their fellow passengers. “A priest told the survivors that the Catholic Church did not regard it as a sin to engage, ‘in extremis,’ in cannibalism of dead bodies,” 


But, Cohen writes. “In a case of killing someone to eat, the ethical and legal considerations are more complex.”


It’s hard to believe that some cannibalism –– along with slavery –– was condoned and justified in the mid-1800s. The “Custom of the Sea” was widely accepted two centuries ago at a time when sailing was precarious and shipwrecks were not uncommon. Cohen includes stories of numerous life-and-death encounters at sea, including some involving American sailing ships, such as the whaler Essex, which inspired Melville's "Moby Dick."


But the Victorian Age was notable not only for its traditions, but also for its reformations. And the public was kept well-informed of reforms through newspapers, which also splashed stories like shipwrecks across front pages.


When Captain Dudley, first mate Stephens, and able Seaman Brooks faced court trials in England upon their return, England was undergoing progressive reforms of labor laws, sanitation and health practices, and greater equality –– away from castes and toward greater democracy.

Progressive reformers called for:

  • No more child prostitution
  • An end to children working as chimney sweeps
  • Free trade –– lowering food prices for the poor and working classes
  • Extending the right to vote, including calls for women’s suffrage
  • Support to labor unions
  • A turn away from violence
  • Dignity of everyone in society

Reformers confronted growing inequality in society as new technologies pushed some workers, including sailors, out of jobs. “New technologies increase profits for the ownership class, but they do not always help workers.”


“To Victorian reformers, in particular, cannibalism at sea represented a part of the old order that they were trying to revamp,” Cohen says. Even when sailors supposedly drew lots to carry out "the Custom of the Sea" it was often the youngest, darkest, or poorest sailor who somehow was sacrificed.


In the forms of reformation, traditionalists who feared change strongly supported Dudley and Stephens and said their actions were justified by a concept called “utilitarianism” –– necessity.


“An old Latin maxim, with origins in Christian canon law, holds that necessities legion non habit, or “necessity knows no law.’” Cohen notes, “The necessity defense has deep roots in Western law and philosophy.” We see the concept used today to justify immigration enforcement, war with Iran, and voting restrictions.


If a leader employs utilitarian tactics and says, “Trust me … I know what’s best for you,” Cohen suggests responding, “No, we do not trust you.”

Utilitarianism is “the philosophical theory that hold that the morally right action is the one that produces the greatest good for the greatest number.” But does it justify murder? Authoritarian dictators such as Hitler, Stalin, Mao, Pol Pot, Idi Amin, and Putin would argue “yes.”


To the Victorian courts the issue was not so much about cannibalism as a utilitarian necessity as it was about the “sin” of taking cabin boy Richard Parker’s life. Parker’s last words, looking up at his captain were “What, me, Sir?”


Progressive reformers in England saw the issue with “moral clarity.” The answer was to follow the law, not subvert the law.  “To slay an innocent and unoffending person to save one’s own life is not a justification or excuse.”


It doesn’t matter that the offender thinks they have God’s permission or forgiveness.


Followers of Jesus believe he sacrificed himself for the salvation of others. Killing the cabin boy (and eat his flesh) in order to save themselves was an “inversion of the concept of self-sacrifice.” Claiming to have God on their side, some said, was "blasphemous."


Supporters and family members of cabin boy Richard Parker placed a memorial “mural tablet” at the graves of the boy’s foster parents. An inscription reads, in part, “Though he slay me, yet I will trust in him. –– Job XIII 15.”


It reads as a poetic indictment of sorts against Captain Dudley.


Here are two “found haiku” discovered in this book, one from the first chapter and one from the final words in the book:


proximity to

mortality had always

been part of sailing


stare out into the

fog undisturbed, searching for

A mast and a sail


Readers of this book or those who study the case of “Queen v. Dudley and Stephens” can learn the surprising verdicts and aftermath, especially relating to Dudley and how he met his fate.


Cohen’s book is at times shocking with grim tales of cannibalism. Notably, he refers to philosophers, authors, and literary works such as Stephen Crane’s “The Open Boat,” Edgar Allan Poe’s “Narration of Arthur Gordon Pym of Nantucket,” Rudyard Kipling’s "The White Man's Burden: The United States and the Philippine Islands,” Daniel DeFoe’s “Robinson Crusoe,” Yann Martel’s “Life of Pi,” original Grimm tales, and Charles Dickens’s “A Christmas Carol.”


These writers, with the exception of Martel, who endorses Cohen's book, are long-dead. But they are also relevant today in confronting growing authoritarianism and the need for true “moral clarity.”



In Dickens’s story the ghost Marley tells wealth-and-power-consumed Scrooge, “Mankind was my business; the common welfare was my business; charity, mercy, forbearance and benevolence were, all, my business.”

Monday, January 20, 2025

‘On Freedom’ Found Haiku, Finding Wisdom

Review by Bill Doughty

Timothy Snyder dedicates “On Freedom” (Crown New York, 2024) “to those who wish to be free.” He attempts to define “freedom” –– positive freedom –– as not destruction and absence of things, but creation and presence of values, including the right kind of moral and political values.


“Virtue,” he writes, “is an inseparable part of freedom.”


So, too, is accountability, honesty, humility, and rule of law.


His book begins on a train in Ukraine, one of three trips to the democratic country he writes about after Putin’s Russia invaded its neighbor.

Snyder takes us along as he travels to and through Ukraine and contemplates the birth of the idea of freedom and democracy in ancient Greece. His writing is beautiful, poignant, and painful –– especially in light of the current state of affairs in the United States and the world where storm clouds seem to be gathering.


He condemns the rise of autocracy, oligarchy, inequality, and what he calls “sadopopulism.” And he offers prescriptions for standing up to greed, grift, and the abuse of power.

“As the future crashes in, we can panic and blame others. Those predictable reactions make us part of the mob and the catastrophe. Or we can, as free people, take responsibility, look deep into Earth’s past, and save the world.”

Freedom must be fought for. It is not a birthright, and it is not preordained. “The moment you believe that freedom is given, it is gone,” he warns.


A recurring theme in “On Freedom” is the need to confront racism in a free country. The military, up till now, has made a concerted effort to increase diversity and reject racism.


World War II was a watershed event: defeating fascism and creating democracies in Japan and Germany while also confronting bigotry, prejudice and discrimination on the home front. Snyder cites examples of veterans of the Second World War who returned to face hate and segregation. He discusses the Freedom Fighters of 1961 and the role of Martin Luther King Jr. and John Lewis in the peaceful fight for freedom, equality, and voting rights. 


We must engage, he asserts, writing on a train ride within Ukraine.


Snyder
And we must reject complacency, supplication to authority, leaders' hypocrisy, and our own lazy thinking, including confirmation bias (treating information as evidence only when it confirms what we already believe).

It is also important to recognize “the false tragedy of choice” presented by social media algorithms — between entrepreneurship and social justice, for example.


“On Freedom” includes an appendix that compares positive and negative freedom. The positive view: Government must be made for freedom; the negative view: Government must be dismantled for freedom. Science is either (positive) how we engage with the world or (negative) “one opinion among others.” Racism is either a historical fact requiring reflection or strictly “personal, irrelevant to freedom.”


Extrapolating from the appendix, security and prosperity are achieved through rule of law and accountability (positive freedom) or strictly imposed through strong-arm policing (negative).


We cannot sacrifice liberty for safety, Snyder advises.


“We believe that we can trade freedom for security. This is a fatal mistake.” A government of, by, and for the people should not be shunned or belittled.


Snyder writes, “We enable freedom not by rejecting government, but by affirming freedom as the guide to good government. Reasoning forward from the right definition of freedom, I believe, will get us to the right sort of government.”


He describes “five forms of freedom” as the “logical, moral, and political links between common action and the formation of free individuals.”

“The five forms are sovereignty, or the learned capacity to make choices; unpredictability, the power to adapt physical regularities to personal purposes; mobility, the capacity to move through space and time following values; factuality, the grip on the world that allows us to change it; and solidarity, the recognition that freedom is for everyone.”

Sometimes the best way to see oneself is through the eyes of others. That applies to people specifically and nations generally. Snyder says his book is for the United States, but, as a historian, he draws comparisons with western Europe, eastern Europe, the Soviet Union, and Nazi Germany.


Synder relies on other Western historians, philosophers, and critical thinkers: Frantz Fanon, Václav Havel, Leszek Kolakowski, Edith Stein, and Simone Weil. And he calls on more familiar names such as Socrates, Thomas Jefferson, George Orwell, and Ray Bradbury to help illustrate his point.

This vital book answers some of the questions brought up in Snyder’s “On Tyranny.” 


In this follow-up, he shows how to fight oligarchy (reject disinformation) and confront climate change (embrace to search for fusion power).


He champions actual infrastructure initiatives, real freedom of speech, and a commitment to civil rights.


We discover hidden unintentional “found haiku” in Snyder’s writing. Seventeen syllables, 5-7-5, displayed in three lines, that capture and focus an insight or truth like a laser. Here are a few:


Freedom is not just

an absence of evil but

A presence of good


Empathy is a

precondition for certain

knowledge of the world


Overconfidence

makes us vulnerable to

the propaganda (of tyrants)


A free person sees

the world in color, as through

a kaleidoscope


Synder’s prose travels effortlessly through countries, eras, and moods, both light and stormy. One moment he writes of oppression in the former Soviet Union and hope in Cold War-era Czechoslovakia; the next moment he expounds on the roots of rock and roll, the Velvet Underground, Louie Louie, and Frank Zappa’s Mothers of Invention. “On Freedom” is a fun, enlightened, but ultimately serious ride on Snyder’s train of thought. 


(Top photo of Ukraine's Carpathian Mountains courtesy of Pixabay)